very cool
I like this alot. The jokes are funny and are my kinda style for the most part. Try working on your coloring and prop design a little more, though. The artwork could have been improved, because for human characters, it looks very cartoonish. Thats fine, but the small things like the shapes of the heads could have been worked on. I guess im just used to watching Decline though. Try to present your work more, instead of having a white background behind some normal blue font. Dim (Super Flash Bros) always fancies up his work and makes it all shiny with nice fonts, title screens, and menu graphics, and TRUST ME its worth it. It can actually get you some more points and makes it look more official and like you spent your time on this "big movie" you want to release.
Also, if you are planning on only making a couple of these, instead of an episode based series (up to like 10 episodes) try making them more epic, with more memorable jokes and such. put your good ol time into each one, and you will be sooo happy with your results and fan response!
work on art next time and keep your sense of humor and you will have a solid peace of work!
keep it up, dude!
PS. YOU BETTER READ THIS REVIEW CUZ I DIDNT TYPE ALL THIS TO HAVE IT IGNORED!!!!!